Developmental Editing

Starting at $800 (based on 40,000 words) ($0.02 per word — quote varies by manuscript length)  

Get two professional eyes on your manuscript—for the price of one. When you book a developmental edit with Grim House Publishing, you’re not just hiring one editor—you’re getting a full critique team.  

This service is powered by Killian Wolf & C.J. Piperata, the duo behind the Grim House YouTube channel.

We’re both experienced editors and authors who specialize in fantasy, romance, horror, and dark fiction. Together, we bring the kind of multi-editor feedback authors used to get in the golden age of traditional publishing, when books were built by teams. What’s Included:  

• A detailed editorial letter covering story structure, pacing, character arcs, theme, and emotional payoff

• Inline comments throughout your manuscript with questions, suggestions, and observations

• Combined feedback from both editors—two sets of strengths, two creative minds

• One follow-up Zoom call or email to discuss revisions and next steps

   📚 Best for: fantasy, romance, paranormal, dark fiction, horror, or anything emotionally intense and plot-rich

   📅 Turnaround: 3–4 weeks per manuscript Please be advised the price on the website is a deposit, and will be deducted from the whole amount, depending on your word count. After purchase, you will be contacted for more information.